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            干货丨托福独立写作 185 题库

            admin 2019-06-14 317人围观 ,发现0个评论

            Some people think that human needs for farmland, housing, and industry are more important than saving land for endangered animals. Do you agree or disagree with this point of view? Why or why not? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

            1. 标题翻译:

            有些人以为人类对犁地,住宅,和工业的需求比保存土地和濒临灭绝的物种更重要?赞同不否?

            2. 审题关键词:

            Human needs; Endangered animals

            3. 证明分析:

            反:假如不维护濒危动物,那么会对环境形成巨大的损坏

            正:濒危动物的消失,会为动物学和生物学带来巨大的丢失

            反:再说明人类关于农田、房子和工业的需求也非常重要,可是维护濒危动物也是必要的

            范文:

            In the past, there have been many endangered animals. Now they are extinct. Does it matter? Has our environment been affected by their absence? Has the quality of our own life been changed? The answer to these questions is "Yes." Yes. It does matter if we destroy an endangered species' habitat in order to develop more farmland, housing or industrial parks. There is a delicate balance of nature: if one small part were to be removed, it would effect all the other parts. For example, if certain trees are cut down, bats will have no place to roost. If they cannot roost, they cannot breed. If there are no bats, there will be no animals which eat insects that plague our crops.

            干货丨托福独立写作 185 题库
            干货丨托福独立写作 185 题库
            干货丨托福独立写作 185 题库

            本段结构比较杂乱。榜首句话引出了要评论的布景,卲濒危动物。后边对此进行了反诘,并协助引出了作者对这个问题的评论。然后引出了作者的观念,天然需求平衡。最终写了一个比如,用 for example 引出。本段实则能够分为两个部分,榜首个部分引进,第二个部分深化评论作者观念。

            本段是文章首段,引出要评论内容,协助作者陈说观念,摆明态度。

            Yes. Our environment has been affected by the absence of certain animals. Certain flowers are pollinated by butterflies, which migrate from Canada to Mexico. Some of the breeding grounds of these butterflies were destroyed. Now these flowers are disappearing from certain areas. We will no longer be able to enjo干货丨托福独立写作 185 题库y their beauty because of the imbalances we have created in nature.

            本段是一个总分总的结构。首要榜首句话点明晰宗旨,咱们的环境由于动物的灭绝会有必定程度的影响。后边是弥补的一个比如,生动详细,协助证明这个观念。最终一句话进行分观念的提高重述,咱们这样损坏环境就没有办法再享用天然的美丽了。

            本段是文章的第二段,也便是正文榜首段,写了支撑作者态度的榜首个分观念。

            Yes. The quality of our life has been changed. America used to be covered with giant trees. Now we have to visit them in one small park. Rainforests around the world are being cut down to make room for humans. We will never be able to see or study this fragile ecosystem. I en干货丨托福独立写作 185 题库courage humans to look for other alternatives for our farmlands, housing, and industries. We have alternatives; the animals do not.

            本段是一个总分总的结构。首要榜首句话点明晰宗旨,咱们的日子质量也由于天然的改动而下降了。第二句话举了一个美国的比如,并告知咱们生态系统现在的软弱。最终两句话提高写人的作文300字观念,重甲作者态度,鼓舞人们开端维护环境,维护动物。

            本段是文章的第三段,也便是正文第二段,写了支撑作者态度的第二个分观念。并在最终提高观念,重申作者态度。

            满分要素分析

            一、言语表达

            文章给人的榜首印象便是长难句比较多,用词比较美丽,使得全体行文流畅,凸显了作者强壮的言语功底。这样给作者的文章极大程度上的长脸添彩了。尽管长难句不是全能的,可是没有长难句是万万不能的。

            二、逻辑结构

            文章选用正正的方式,两个正面支撑的阶段支撑了本文首要观念,咱们要维护环境,结构比较简单。本文段内结构杂乱,都是总分总的方式,并且都辅有比如协助证明观念,证明充沛。

            本篇文章的特点是用设问句引领出了一系列的观念 Has our environment been affected bytheir absence?作者在一下正文的三个阶段都用了 Yes 对其进行答复,视点不同,分别是环境不人类日子质量的影响。

            声明:该文观念仅代表作者自己,搜狐号系信息发布渠道,搜狐仅供给信息存储空间服务。
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